Friday, 14 October 2016

Second day review



New second day from conor mckeon
changes made in red.

2 comments:

  1. Conor, although you do draw on some examples and cover the four technical areas, this is quite brief and lacking in detailed analysis or examples. Vanessa

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  2. You have made some improvements, such as the editing pace. However what you say about sound is not relevant- she doesn't really speak at all

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