Conor, although you do draw on some examples and cover the four technical areas, this is quite brief and lacking in detailed analysis or examples. Vanessa
You have made some improvements, such as the editing pace. However what you say about sound is not relevant- she doesn't really speak at all
Conor, although you do draw on some examples and cover the four technical areas, this is quite brief and lacking in detailed analysis or examples. Vanessa
ReplyDeleteYou have made some improvements, such as the editing pace. However what you say about sound is not relevant- she doesn't really speak at all
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