Evaluation
What was your aim? Donating money, Raising awareness
Our aim primary aim was to raise awareness for great ormond street hospital. We did this because we liked how they helped young children through life threatening illnesses and disabilities, we wanted to show what they are doing for the community and how they are helping.
Original ideas- coreys pitch, storyboards, Plan B
Compared to our original idea, our production changed lot, this is for many reasons. But the main reason was that we couldn't get permission from great ormond street to film in the hospital. So me and aaron thought of a way around this and made my bedroom look like a hospital bed.
There was also a problem with speaking in the advert. We wanted the advert to have no speaking. But it was very hard to get our message across without speaking.
Strengths and weaknesses?
Our biggest strength was the scenes when matthew and me are bmxing. I think this because it shows how happy he is after his stay at great ormond street hospital.
Another strength of our piece was adding the logo at the end of the production. This helps viewers know what charity we are representing.
Our final strength was our editing. We used different types of editing skills but the one that stood out was the reversed music. I did this whilst editing and i thought it worked well in the production
Our weaknesses
In our prediction our worst weakness was our audio levels. The music was louder thasn the speaking and miss had to turn up when the music stopped.
Another weakness is our location. We used the same location twice at different scenes, we used the hospital bed in the scene of matthew is resting. And we used the same room in the interview. This can confusing for some viewers.
How did filming go? Team work
The filming well fine, i got the shots of me and matthew riding one night when we went riding and aaron was telling me other shots to get. For example the bed scene. I think the filming for our production went well.
This is a decent start with some realistic evaluation of strengths and weaknesses, from planning, filming and editing. You are rather brief however and you could have expanded your examples. You needed to include the audience feedback you received, and you needed to consider the aims of the film more carefully, and whether or not you successfully raised awareness for Great Ormond Street. Vanessa
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